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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factors that influence us. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Whether to stay happy or not is someone's own responsibility, as thought of a few. While, others contradict and argue that there are many other things that are considered to play a
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 regard. In my opinion, I believe that several factors including; social, environmental and financial, have a considerable
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 to make an individual happy. On the one hand, many believe that every individual, himself, is responsible for bringing a joy to his own life. It seems logical that a
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 who is in the pursuit of happiness will probably keep finding the little moments to stay happy in comparison to the one who always need a big reason to make himself delighted.
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, people who enjoy and celebrate every bit of their lives tends to remain more joyful.
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, a
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 who requires a big reason or achievement to celebrate, seldom gets these chances in his life.
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, it is perhaps needless to say that a man himself is responsible for bringing jubilation in his life.
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, there are a few who are of the view that external factors have a more important
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 in keeping a
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 delighted and I agree. It is understandable that factors like environmental, social and financial conditions have a huge effect on the human behaviour. To put it more simply, it is our common observation that a pleasant weather casts a positive impact on our behaviour and we feel happy.
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, meeting a
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 whom we love or we are friends with; is certainly joyful.
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, some people feel great once they get the reward of their hard work that may be in the form of appreciation or monetary benefits.
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, it is obvious that why people relate prosperity to external stimuli rather than one's inner self. To conclude, people may vary in their opinion, but I strongly consider that enjoyment is more dependent on the external factors than simply a result of an individual's efforts. It is because the stimuli like pleasant weather, financial benefits and social factors have a significant
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 in making a
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 happy and joyful.

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