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While some sports are typically played in teams, others are usually done by individuals. There are, of course, benefits to both team sports and individual ones, and this essay will explore both, before coming to the conclusion that team sports are slightly more beneficial.

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Many people argue that sports should be played individually while others say it should be in teams.
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the famous chess player reveals that he had been practicing chess all alone since his childhood
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 football all the other players cover the main spinner to reach the goal.
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 both the sports
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