As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many socially conscious public figures have called on businesses to show greater
responsibility
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to the societies they depend on. In my opinion, the
responsibility
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of a business towards
society
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extends to ethical management of their own
operations but
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operations, but
not to areas largely outside their purview. Large and small businesses are no different from individuals and have the same obligation to be ethical. Every business, conducting themselves in a just manner, will contribute greatly to the betterment of
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. A local grocery shop that pays its workers a living wage, charges fair prices, keeps accurate books, and sells quality food taken in the aggregate with stores around the country, produces innumerable benefits for both staff and patrons. Large companies are no exception. If Apple pays employees well and builds quality products while adhering to environmental and economic regulations, they make the world a better place.
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, companies without moral compass like Facebook exact a heavy toll on
society
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in exchange for their services.
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, companies should not be forced to
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take greater responsibility for
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for greater societal ills unless they are in some way culpable. A good example of
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relates to education. The education of children and adolescents is the foundation of a stable, content
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.
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for education lies squarely with governments and parents, notwithstanding some private enterprise schools. If a company comes in direct contact with a school,
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by selling them textbooks,
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the company is responsible for the quality of their products. If they pollute nearby land and students get sick, the company should bear full
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as well. In all other matters not under their direct influence, parents and governments take on the sole burden of care. In conclusion, businesses are only in contact with certain aspects of
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and they should not be asked to assume a full burden of
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. As free market companies become larger and supplant national governments
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may require re-examination.
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