Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?".

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It is argued by many people that the production of people has a negative
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
to
environment
Suggestion
the environment
which make the climate become more polluted.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
this
Linking Words
essay will illustrate some solution to deal with
this
Linking Words
problem
Linking Words
firstly
Suggestion
Firstly
, now a day people tend to
waste
Use synonyms
produced more and more out the environment that make the place where we live become polluted. So we need to reduce the trash we produced out the environment.
For example
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, we can limit use the plastic bag and try to use the produce, which make
in
Suggestion
with
paper or some materials we can reuse.
beside
Suggestion
Beside
that we
also
Linking Words
reduce the household
waste
Use synonyms
by installing the filtration system for our house.
Linking Words
secondly
Suggestion
Secondly
, the government
Linking Words
also share
Suggestion
also shares
the responsibility with residents, because many
Use synonyms
waste
Suggestion
wastes
were created by industries.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
government should release some law to ban the industry.
Linking Words
for
Suggestion
For
instance, in japan the industries who created the untreated
waste
Use synonyms
will be punished.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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