The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The illustration below provides information on two possible locations
of
a new Change preposition
for
supermarket
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that is
planned for the Linking Words
town
of Garlsdon.
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Overall
, it seems that the chosen locations are far from each other and located in different parts of the Linking Words
town
. So neither of Use synonyms
Add an article
the site
site
is appropriate for all the towns.
To start with, the first location for the Fix the agreement mistake
sites
supermarket
is in the countryside. It is 12 I’m close to Hindol Use synonyms
which
population is only 10,000 people, Correct pronoun usage
whose
however
, Linking Words
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
supermarket
number one is quite far from housing and the Use synonyms
town
Center.
Compared to store number one, Use synonyms
supermarket
number two is situated in the Use synonyms
Town
Center Use synonyms
that
has no traffic zone, so that would make Correct pronoun usage
which
this
location more convenient for residents. Linking Words
This
market is closer to Linking Words
Industry
area and other local towns, Correct article usage
the Industry
such
as Brandson and Cransdon. The main road to Brandso is 16 km and the road Linking Words
of
Cransdon is 9 km more.Change preposition
to
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