Some people think that school have to be more entertaining while others think that their sold purpose to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific resons and examples to support your opinion

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During

this

day more and more the

school

has extracurricular activities to be more entertaining. And

this

opinion has my support is

school

have to be more entertaining.

This

is a wide array of

resons

a rational motive for a belief or action

reasons

. Fist

resons

a rational motive for a belief or action

reasons

, is after a stressful studying day student need to be entertaining. Because it can help

they

objective case of they

them

reduce stress, no more pressure. They

will don't be

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won't be

will not be

afraid to go to

school

. And

second

resons

a rational motive for a belief or action

reasons

reason

it will making inspiration for student they can study hard, working hard, develop many skills

such

as:

commnication

the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information

communication

communications

skills, dance skills, sing skills...

for

Suggestion

For

example:

stundent

a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution

students

student

can find some talent, they can be better with talent.

Last

resons

school

should have to be more entertaining to

ceate

make or cause to be or to become

create

a better learning

enironment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

121 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people think that school have to be more entertaining while others think that their sold purpose to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific resons and examples to support your opinion

Include an introduction and conclusion

Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Many employers find that their new employees lack sufficient interpersonal skills such as lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes? Can you suggest some possible solutions?

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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