Some people believe that development of computer has changed the human lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today’s fast-paced world nobody can argue with the fact that computer-based technologies have
vital role
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a vital role
in our daily lives. There are critics who claim that
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condition will be changed completely by
development
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the development
of different aspects of
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science. I believe that high amount of reliance on smart devices has not good consequences. There are various theories about the outcomes of technology
usage
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used
in modern societies. Some of the experts believe that most of the tasks will be accomplished by computers.
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, the progression of bank applications leads to decreasing the number of customers who attend bank branches for doing financial matters.
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introduced ten years ago at the beginning of
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a new decade
the new decade
, financial programs have taken the responsibility of economic tasks which need human planning as well as infrastructure organizing.
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, major roles and duties will be undergone by new designed computer programs and applications which control every
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detail
of important things. There is no doubt that heavy dependence on computers has complicated repercussions. It is not surprising if some of the people suffer from physical and mental problems which stem from overusing computers.
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, substitution of many pivotal tasks which have been done by clerks in office with robots, causing difficulties
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as backbone ache, obesity and depression among employees.
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, if mental activities
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as calculating and estimating replace with computers, our brain cannot easily do the routine tasks that has had done before. To sum up,
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, our world will be dominated by computers in future. There would be
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a new progression
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area and
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computers will have
main role
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the main role
a main role
main roles
in different sections. What’s more, these developments can cause problematic issues for workers and users of
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new
technologies
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technology
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