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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

#education #luxury #right #wealth
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Education
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 is
basic
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a basic
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of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
 everyone. Every child should get a basic
level
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 of
education
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 irrespective of the
persons
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person's
 wealth. I agree with the sentence that
education
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 is a basic need of a human being. Everyone should get it free at a certain
level
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. All the countries have their own rules for the basic
education
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. Yes of course, money makes a big difference in
education
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. Now a days private schools are very costly, everyone can't effort the fee
of
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for
 those schools. But there are government school in each country and states to support the people of the country. Now a days government schools are
also
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 having all the facilities to improve the
education
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 levels. In my opinion
basic
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the basic education level
education
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level
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 is the human right of every human being and they should get it free of cost for a basic
level
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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