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Many local languages today are dying out due to the rise of languages like English. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Based on the extending usage of some worldwide-used languages,
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 as English, to make interactions more convenient, some local literature has been demolished.
In contrast
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, English, as a most crucial language worldwide, is used not only in English spoken countries like England, or Australia, but
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 is some regions where have had their unique tongue. So, it would have either advantages, or disadvantages. But which one is bolder? In fact, trying to use a united spoken method definitely make conversations more comprehensive, and prevent misunderstandings.
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 of all, it should be noticed that different languages have a variety of slangs and idioms that people are eager to interpret them in the middle of a talking in English.
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, the following person, maybe cannot realize the exact meaning of the phrase.
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, the word ‘drop’ is widely used in Persian, like I dropped the car in the garage and it is meant ‘you parked the car’, but it does not make any sense in English.
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, languages can show some aspects of a culture by demonstrating the appropriate way of writing or speaking in different occasions or situation.
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, by demolishing a talking style, there is a possibility to miss a culture, too. But it can be a precaution to so many misunderstandings among people.
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 as, how people can distinguish between writing a formal, semiformal, and informal letter.
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, for the most crucial effect of having a united language, it should be noticed that in
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 way, nothing distracts or interrupts people when they do need to communicate.
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, in an international business meeting, people are keen to shift to English
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 of insisting on their mother tongue. To conclude, there is a global demand to choose a certain wording to not only make a conversation easier, but
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 help us to avoid misunderstandings. So, even though it may lead to vanishing a mother tongue, it will help to get the best of our conversations.
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, the world is going to be akin to an integrated structure more and more. So, believe it or not, a unique language would be an unwilling need.
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