In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.
Nowadays, many people around the world are suffering from overweight. Obesity in human is so serious an issue that it decreased the health and well-being of people.
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essay will analyse some causes of obesity and provide some logical solutions.
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Firstly
, increasing in weight can be excess Linking Words
consumption
of sugary foods Suggestion
consumed
such
as; Chocolate, Burger, Candy and Carbonated drinks. Linking Words
This
kind of junks accumulated in the body system and turn to fat. Linking Words
Furthermore
, eating too much of eatery Linking Words
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the practice or manner of preparing food or the food so prepared
cuisine
cousin
do
great harm to the body. Suggestion
does
For instance
, Mac Donald foods Linking Words
was prepared
and packaged to attract the people especially children. In which a lot of recipes high in calories are added to taste good. Suggestion
were prepared
Therefore
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government
should impose Suggestion
the government
high
taxes on cafeteria and carbonated drinks. Suggestion
higher
Hence
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government
should encourage individuals to eat healthy food Suggestion
the government
such
as; Fruits, Vegetables and Nuts.
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Secondly
, a survey conducted in 2018 by world health organization shows that 57% of overweight people are not physically fit. Linking Words
That is
, many people are not doing exercise to keep themselves fit, Linking Words
for example
; eating three Linking Words
square
a day without exercise like Yoga and simple aerobics can result in obesity. Suggestion
squares
Thus
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government
needs to provide many fitness and recreational Suggestion
the government
centers
and an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
also
encourage the masses to indulge in gymnastics. Linking Words
In addition
, there should be a campaign of awareness to educate the community Linking Words
of
the benefits of exercise.
In conclusion, overweight is a Suggestion
about
on
dieases
and both an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
diesels
government
and individual needs to take drastic measures to stop it. To recapitulate, eating homemade food, fruits, vegetables, and doing physical activities we help cultivate the increment in weight.Use synonyms
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