The table shows the change in the percentage of people joining in seven different sports from 1999 to 2009.
The table illustrates the variation in the proportion of
people
attending in
seven kinds of sports in Change preposition
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the
Europe between 1999 to 2009.
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Overall
, It is viewed that, football always received the highest percentage of people
than
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rest
of Correct article usage
the rest
others
. Correct article usage
the others
Whereas
, golf had a small number of people
in 1999.
To begin
, about 57% of people
joined in
football in 1999, which Change preposition
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was
decreased steadily in other recorded years but always occupied the highest proportion. Unnecessary verb
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Whereas
, the number of people
joined
tennis was 32% less than in football in 1999 but there was a slight increase and reached Correct pronoun usage
who joined
to
33% in 2009. About 32% Change preposition
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people
swam in 1999, it just increased slightly to 34% and flattened out after 2004.
As can be seen, there is a mere minority of golf and volleyball; Change preposition
of people
however
, they jumped further
17
% and 185 respectively in 2009. Basketball accounted for 26% in 1999 and it experienced a decrease of 2% in 2009. Change preposition
by 17
By contrast
, Yoga had only 10% of people
in the first five years and raised to 13% in 2009.Submitted by Nga on
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