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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children, Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couple who decide to do this.

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Nowadays there are many young couples who want to be Childfree because they cannot manage their financial conditions and social life along with raising a youth, there are some thick and thins of
such
 decisions, I will discuss those in upcoming paragraph.
Firstly
, in the present era, married couples do not want to have children and the basic reason is that they can tackle all the situations together, they do not want to make their life stressful.
Secondly
, they do not want to ruin their dreams behind a baby, they do not want to spend all the time changing their nappies and taking care of them, they want to live their dreams and make themselves financially strong.
lastly
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Lastly
,
such
 couples think after having an infant, their sex life can be destroyed. So it is good not to have children.
On the other hand
, as a coin has two sides, it
also have
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also has
 some disadvantages, not having an offspring is not a very good choice because without having a toddler you cannot line up,
moreover
, without youngster a house is like a deserted place, it is saying that children are the form of GOD, so, having an adolescent in the house is like paradise. To put in a nutshell, having children or not is an individual choice and all the decision should be taken after having a deep conversation and taking advice from experienced people.
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