Prevention is better than cure out of a country's health budget in last portion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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With the large number of growing population on our planet
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a new kind of
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are
also
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found and it cost a lot of their treatment. They believe that we should use prevention methods
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of cure and we should spend more money on health education and preventive measures
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of treatment. In
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essay I would like to express my point of view with relevant examples.
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, Today our lifestyle is changing
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and there is a humongous amount of population on our planet. With everything changing on our planet new type of
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are found and everyone can not treat them,
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is where doctors play a very important role. For us doctors are like god who can help save someones life, but sometime the treatment are way more expensive for an ordinary person.
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, if any one has or infected by
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to which only limited doctors know how to treat, it costs an enormous amount of money. It is not everyone's cup of tea.
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, If we spend that amount on educating people, it can prevent many
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disease
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diseases
and they would know what measures to be taken. Peoples can be educated in different ways
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as on tv, radio or even conducting education seminars. I believe hospitals play a major role and as well as all the medicines, but if people are more educated about how
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disease
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are caused and what can be done to prevent it,
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it might help public.
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, to help people's with Castor oil issues or people's who are having sugar problem's, public should be educated and should be taught that measures to be taken before they go in critical conditions. As for today
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two problems are mostly found due to, change in our diet. To summarize, To do research on new found
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or flue can cost a lot and to cover that expenses medicines and hospitals tend to charge a lot. But, we should keep our self educated and use all the prevention methods to stop widespread of it. At
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last hospital
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the last hospital
are there for us to help us, but I believe if we are educated it might help to reduce the number of patients.
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  • prevention
  • cure
  • divert
  • health budget
  • treatment
  • health education
  • preventive measures
  • diseases
  • healthcare
  • importance
  • role
  • value
  • agree
  • disagree
  • position
  • outline
  • essay
  • state
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