The diagram below shows the stages and and equipment used in the process of making matches. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the stages and and equipment used in the process of making matches. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram describes how to make matches by using
equipment
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the equipment
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. In general,
this
is a hand-made process. There
is
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are
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on
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apply
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8 stages to produce matches. First of all, we use
peeler
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a peeler
the peeler
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to peel
the
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apply
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log 4
while
using
veneer
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a veneer
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and
blade
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a blade
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to make the wood more beautiful. After that, we chop the peeled log into a small
stick
.
Then
, we put the
stick
into
ammonium
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the ammonium
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phosphate
tank
and after that, we dry the
stick
which has been dipped into the chemical
tank
. After
makes
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making
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the
stick
dry, we put it in a hopper and use
blower
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a blower
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to blow the
stick
to the storage area by
go
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going
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through the metal duct. The
stick
in the storage area will fall on a
convoger
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convener
converge
.
Then
, the
stick
will drop into
a
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an
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inserter. After that, the
stick
will
put
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be put
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in a perforated steel belt and go
pass
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past
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3 chemical tanks which
is
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are
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called
paraffin
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the paraffin
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wax
tank
, based chemicals
tank
,
tip
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and tip
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chemicals
tank
. After that
stages
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stage
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, the
stick
will be dried. After all of that stages, the matches will be packaged.
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