Question: In my place, a new home are needed, but only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build a new home there. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, The
problem
of living
space
has
risen
come into existence; take on form or shape
arisen
due to
population
growth. Now, Global
population
has been
increases
Suggestion
increased
by millions to trillion, over
population
growth means poverty, living
problem
, small
space
available for house
build
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builds
, more pollution and many more problems occur due to high
population
growth.One of the major
problem
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problems
is land to live.
Moreover
, people living in a small shelter
space
in
city
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the city
cities
a city
. Because,
population
rate is increasing day by
day that's
Accept comma addition
day, that's
why land
space
available for Apartment or house is only in the
countryside
. There was more
space
available as well as
less pollution level
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the less pollution level
in
countryside
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the countryside
. But the
problem
is the
countryside
space
is dangerous to live because it's away from the city.
Therefore
,
Accept space
,
most people prefer to live in
crowded place
Suggestion
a crowded place
within the
country
and people
believes
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believe
, at least they live in
secure place
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a secure place
. Live in
countryside
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the countryside
is not a piece of cake. The
countryside
having their own advantages and much more disadvantages.
For example
: Ladakh is a mesmerising
countryside
place to live.
However
, Ladakh is located between India and China boundary. If any issues happen between nations ultimately border crisis will observe. Like firing, bomb blast that kind of
harch
unpleasantly stern
harsh
hatch
heroic
activity may be
face
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the face
by
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of
citizen of Ladakh.People
wants
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want
peace, freedom.
Therefore
, most of
people
Suggestion
the people
avoid to live in the
countryside
area. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
It has no doubt
countryside
area is
clam
steadiness of mind under stress
calm
, pollution free but extremely dangerous. I think people should
leave
inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of
live
in the
countryside
area because disputes created by people similar way disputes resolved by friendship. If both
country
's people
takea
carry out
take
takes
taken
a decision to
live
go away from a place
leave
their
countryside
border. Ideally, they will become neighbour. It means community forms between two
country
's
border
Suggestion
borders
.
This
is beneficial for both
country
's development and peace.
Last
but not the least, one day every
country
becomes a developed
country
.
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