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Some people argue that if children behave badly, their parents should accept responsibility and also be punished for the behavior of their children. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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It is argued that for misbehaviour of children, their parents should be held accountable and punished.
This
 essay disagrees with
this
 statement because it will create fear of punishment
in parents which
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in which parents
 can directly impact
child
 growth and
also
 behaviour is directly linked to the nature of
child
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the child
a child
 and cannot be controlled by parents. Parents cannot be responsible for their
child
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child's
 misdeeds. Children mostly learn
this
 kind of behaviour outside the home. Blaming parents can create fear of punishment and it can force them to put more restriction on their juveniles.
This
 can have
negative impact
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a negative impact
 on the
child
 growth as it
lead
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leads
 to inadequate freedom
that is
 required for the
child
 development. Some children are very stubborn in nature and it is very difficult for parents to manage them. It is hard for parents to teach discipline to these children and most of them usually give up. Children at the young age make mistakes unintentionally and most
importantly they
Accept comma addition
importantly, they
 are not aware of the consequences. It is wrong to blame parents as children tend to make mistakes at
tender age
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a tender age
.
On the other hand
, it is
also
 true that its
parents responsibility
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the parents responsibility
 to teach discipline to the children. They should be the
first
 one to guide and nurture their children in a positive environment. To conclude, parents play a vital role in overall development and well-being of
child
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children
the child
, but it would be wrong to punish them for
child
 mistakes. The children mean to make mistakes and learn from them. What is more, it is a system which is very hard to follow.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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