The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists?

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Today, with the power of

internet

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the internet

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we can easily get access to the latest world news.You can search up about anything

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Even though

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there are a lot of journalists around the world who are good at their work

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people still can’t trust the news with journalists found out. Nowadays there is a competition between journalists.Everyone tries to find news as fast as possible and establish it

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Some journalists may report

news which

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news, which

they didn’t double check

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Even more, some of them report a

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click bait

news to attract public’s attention

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And they get paid for that.

On the other hand

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there are some honest reporters

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There

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They're

people we can always trust and believe.They are professional at their work.These journalists try their best to find the best news

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In conclusion, I think that we need something from which we can check if the news is true or not.Because if we keep reading fake news

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in the future people won’t believe the news which they are reading

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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists?

Fully explain your ideas

The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However some say that young people can also take the lead of organisations or companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Ordinary people copy famous people whome they see on TV and magazines. Do you think this is a positive development?

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What can be done to solve this problem?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?