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Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offence while other say they should be free to make noise without limitations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #noise #offence #limitations
The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in our era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring news to us, but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists? Loads of people read news and newspapers every single day and some even
overexaggerate
.News are a law for them and everything which is published on them is not always true.The biggest responsibility of the journalists is to provide journals with information.No one actually cares if it is false, they just write.Some type pure nonsense, but many believe them because they are "professionals".So many fake and wrong figures have been printed and 75% has not been checked for correct data. In my opinion the government should re-read and inspect for accuracy.Those newspapers which do not produce precise data should be banned from the news industry or just provide us with true details.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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