Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is generally thought that, young adults should

further

their study in universities in order to gain a better learning before working.

However

, some think that they should encourage to work, to serve the community

instead

of

further

schooling. In

this

essay, both views would be discussed. On the one hand, it is extremely beneficial for the young adults receiving a university schooling because they are able to select their favourite subject and their major

therefore

they could advance their learning beyond the subjects which may aid the students in developing an innovative idea later.

For instance

, technical development relays heavily on technological

knowledge

and not merely depends on working

practice

in order to create a software.

Therefore

, with the expand on the specific education, young adults could better utilise their specialized

knowledge

to make an effort to the community in the future and in turns promoting advancement of the community.

On the other hand

, it is worth notice that, working experience is of the utmost importance for personal career development. Since many occupations require hands on experiences rather than

knowledge

Accept comma addition

knowledge, such

such

as builders require to build infrastructure that significantly important for a society, but do not usually hurting for much education as they only have to follow the producers which distribute by the agriculture and

then

understand the occupational safety

then

they could start working.

Furthermore

, having certain working

practice

is the key to receive a better promotion and a well-paid job as most of the job offer in the market available for fresh graduates who are with little or no

practice

area with low-paid and few choices.

Therefore

, many students may start working as soon as they finished their higher studies at school. In conclusion, people believe that studying in a university equip the young adults with

knowledge

that may require in their future career while some believe that working

practice

is way more important than receiving

knowledge

in university as hands on experience is outweighed

knowledge

in some jobs and is essential in their personal career development in the long runs. In my opinion, young adults should

further

their study in universities so as to gain

knowledge

before working and develop their own strengths to contribute the society.