Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

#sports #professionals #money #people #professions

As per my opinion an individual in their own field with great knowledge and experience are earning good amount of money for

objective form of "I"

.g. Doctors, Athletes and lawyer,

however

from all other professionals the sports are more prominent. Sports have been connected and brought people and nation together and it has been loved by everyone with all age groups. There are many sports

such

as Tennis, Football, Cricket, Hockey and Golf etc. From which the golf is very expensive sports and played by rich people,

nevertheless

the most loveable, enormous and popular sports is Football. The football player is very famous and cherished by people because of their talent and style and it is a very risky sport were mostly the players are getting injured whilst playing. The popularity of successful players has been increased and they are in demand by commercial firm. There are many clubs in premier league where the successful player has been bought by a businessman with an immense price so they could build a strong team and win the league. Sports is an industry with unparalleled global reach and power. Globally sports related turnover amounts to three percent of world total economic activity,

therefore

the player is earning a good amount of money.

On the other hand

, there are some professional which are important

such

as Doctors, Pilots and Lawyer which required high qualification and experience.

This

profession is highly in demand and earned a great amount of money, but some people think it is not fair that the highly qualified are not earning as the

sportsperson

. In my opinion all the professionals are different in nature and due to their popularity the individual is earning

accordingly

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

281 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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financial remuneration
exceptional
merit
talent
demand
entertainment value
career span
physical demands
justified
unfair
criticism
income inequality
societal priorities
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