Universities should accept equal numbers of female and male students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the gender equality issue has become a mainstream topic, which is demanding more female quota in many areas

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a question about the candidate's competency, especially in a higher education area, where they have a foundation of recruiting the best student to their place. I disagree about the university should apply the gender equality's quota idea in their class. Analysing the necessity of the student's capability requirement, as well as the sex speciality issue will prove

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of all, the university needs a capable student to keep their class standard and gender quota would lower it.

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, a medical

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, which require some certain skill from them, would need to screen their pupil's skill through their competition to earn their place and study

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without any difficulties.

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, if they rise more male or female seat in

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class, it would soften the competition and lower the standard. Even so, there is a bias case

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as Japan that keep their medical female candidate at minimum. As for keeping high skilled graduated physician, the school needs to keep

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method as it matter to the patient's life.

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, both sexes have their speciality that allows them to do better in that area, implementing

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policy would cause a problem.

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, if the engineer, which is a

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that fit for male than female due to the hard labour, allow the smaller male portion policy, it would produce less male to the labour market and

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the market will have to deal with less sturdy employee. Yet, some female engineer proven that they could bare the hard labour, while some of them can do better than the male. As for the sex speciality, it is an inevitable general truth for many generations. In conclusion, the university should not implement

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balance policy as it will bring more drawback than the benefits.

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, I disagree with the sex balance idea in every

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. Regarding to the equality, it should apply in other place than the education section.

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

361 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
diversity aspects

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Universities should accept equal numbers of female and male students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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