You are not satisfied with the changing room in a Sports Centre that you visit. Write a letter to the Sports Centre manager. In your letter Explain the problem Say how you feel about this problem What steps you would like manager to take.
I am writing to complain about the pathetic condition of the changing
room
in sports
centre. I am disappointed to find Add an article
a sports
the sports
such
terrible condition of well known Sports Complex in our locality.
I have been a member of this
renowned Sports Centre for quite a few years now.
However
, I have never seen this
substandard condition of changing rooms. First
and foremost, the floor tiles of the room
having flag
and it could hurt someone Add an article
a flag
bad
.
Another major issue in that changing Change the adjective
badly
room
is the leakage of water from the air conditioner vents. Therefore
, it impacted the walls as the paint is getting off quickly and thus
resulting in foul smell all around the room
which is unbearable.
Therefore
, we are not finding this
changing room
up to the mark. As we have already spent large
amount of membership fees and felt like we are not getting the worth of our Change the article
a large
hard earned
money. Add a hyphen
hard-earned
Moreover
, health
and safety of members Correct article usage
the health
has
been completely neglected.
Appreciate quick action Change the verb form
have
can
be taken for Correct pronoun usage
that can
refurbishment
of the changing Add an article
the refurbishment
room
at the earliest and also
would like to get a
partial compensation for the same. I trust the situation will improve in future.
Yours faithfully,
Jaideep SinghRemove the article
apply
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The Greeting
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- Dear + name
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