You are not satisfied with the changing room in a Sports Centre that you visit. Write a letter to the Sports Centre manager. In your letter Explain the problem Say how you feel about this problem What steps you would like manager to take.

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I am writing to complain about the pathetic condition of the changing

room

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sports

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a sports

the sports

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centre. I am disappointed to find

such

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terrible condition of well known Sports Complex in our locality. I have been a member of

this

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renowned Sports Centre for quite a few years now.

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, I have never seen

this

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substandard condition of changing rooms.

First

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and foremost, the floor tiles of the

room

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having

flag

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a flag

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and it could hurt someone

bad

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badly

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. Another major issue in that changing

room

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is the leakage of water from the air conditioner vents.

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, it impacted the walls as the paint is getting off quickly and

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resulting in foul smell all around the

room

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which is unbearable.

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, we are not finding

this

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changing

room

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up to the mark. As we have already spent

large

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a large

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amount of membership fees and felt like we are not getting the worth of our

hard earned

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hard-earned

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money.

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health

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the health

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and safety of members

has

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have

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been completely neglected. Appreciate quick action

can

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that can

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be taken for

refurbishment

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the refurbishment

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of the changing

room

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at the earliest and

also

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would like to get

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apply

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partial compensation for the same. I trust the situation will improve in future. Yours faithfully, Jaideep Singh

nareshSat May 30 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

unsanitary
unpleasant
frustrating
substandard
unacceptable
disappointing
inconvenient
unhygienic
maintenance
cleaning
facilities
outdated
repair
shortage
lockers
benches
showers
functioning
staff
unhelpful
impolite
privacy partitions
ventilation
smell
lighting
inspections

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The Greeting

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