The graph below shows the concerns which affect governments and businesses when they make decisions about environmental policy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,
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The bar graph illustrates the concerns influencing decision makings on governments and companies’ environmental policy. Analysis of the graph can be divided into three parts: affecting
government
more, affecting business
more, and affecting evenly.
To begin
with
the fields that are influencing Add a comma
,with
government
more, while
legislation has the biggest percentage
of importance for the government
, which is slightly less than 30 %, it has only 15% for the business
. In addition
, costs relating to disposal also
affects
the Correct subject-verb agreement
affect
government
, which is 10%, twice more than business
, 5 %. In media comment
, the Fix the agreement mistake
comments
government
has slightly
higher Add an article
a slightly
percentage
, 10%, than the business
, just below 10%.
Turning to the fields that are affecting business
more, in saving energy and land property dealings, the percentage
of business
is dramatically higher, just over 25% and 10% respectively, than what it is of the government
, around 13% and 5% each. Public concern for environment
Correct article usage
the environment
also
has the
higher Correct article usage
a
percentage
in business
, exactly 15 %, and slightly under 15% in the counterpart.
Lastly
, costs of recycling and health and safety regulations have the exactly
same Replace the word
exact
percentage
in both the government
and the business
, which are 15% and 5% respectively.Submitted by Soichi Homma on
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