Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Knowledge is power, freedom of expression and speech is the crucial part of the most modern countries,
hence
many people believe that sharing
information
freely, the future world will be enhanced. Meanwhile, others think that some
information
should be limited.
Although
some reasons for sharing
information
freely relate to science development and benefits to society, I believe that some
information
needs finance and security. On one hand, people should support the sharing of science,
business
and academic word because of some reasons.
Firstly
, free access to
this
information
will facilitate people work and study.
For instance
, if a successful businessman
shares
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shared
share
experience about setting up and running
business
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a business
the business
effectively, many others can learn from it and start their own
business
in the right way.
Secondly
, scientific breakthrough
can achieved
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can achieve
faster when people do not need to pay money to acquire necessary knowledge.
For example
,
information
on cancer can be accessed freely on the internet, so scientists can come up with a pill to cure
this
disease.
On the other hand
, I
agree the view that
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agree with the view that
some
information
is too important to spread widely.
For example
, research about
weapon
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weapons
the weapon
and nuclear science is extremely sensitive and
confidential because
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confidential, because
if
this
research is leaked, many terrorists or criminals can use illegally.
Likewise
, some
information
regarding
business
finance should be kept confidential by the company to stay ahead of the competition, sharing
this
information
may lead to major financial loss for the company and its competitive edge. In conclusion,
although
some people are in
favor
promote over another
favour
of sharing academic knowledge freely, I strongly believe that some
information
should not be shared because of its importance and value.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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