Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A) Introduce yourself B) Explain what the problem is C) Suggest solutions

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about
noise
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disturbance caused by underground piping work in my area. My name is Shen Chee Ho and I am
law
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student currently residing in Villa Apartment on
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Oxford road. I have stayed there for more than 10 years. I am a postgraduate student currently in the latter stage of doing my final year thesis. For the past 2 weeks, underground water piping replacement work is running in my area and sometimes it extends until
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late
night
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at night

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. During the drilling process, the machine produces
high frequency
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high-frequency

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noise
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and vibration. The
noise
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distributing my sleep and I cannot focus to continue my thesis writing during the daytime. To reduce the
noise
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effect, I would suggest installing
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noise
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reduction partition and form a barrier to cover up the construction area.
This
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

equipment can reduce 80% of the
noise
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produce during the drilling process.
Besides
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

that, please restrict the working hours only allows during the daytime which most of the residents and students are in the office and school. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jarod Shen
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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