Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Grouping of students in the
class rooms
a room in a school where lessons take place
classrooms
according to their behaviour is a matter of debate nowadays. Some people
are
of the view that arrogant pupils spoil the
class
discipline and they have a negative impact on the grooming of their peers,
therefore
, they should be educated in separate classrooms. I disagree with the statement and believe that grouping ill-disciplined learners will become a management dilemma for school authorities and educational objectives will be impossible to meet for all. Behaviour of student is the
first
and foremost step in achieving excellence in life and the development of an accomplished personality. Each student in the
class
has different behaviour, some
are
keen learners while some
are
mischievous, disobedient, noisy and they do not let other fellows to learn. These destructive minds spoil the
class
atmosphere and if they
are
grouped together under one roof, they will be difficult to control by the teachers and school authorities. They will ruin the learning atmosphere and teachers will not be interested at all to make them learn.
Moreover
,
such
a
class room
a room in a school where lessons take place
classroom
where some
are
making noise, some
are
pushing and nudging others and others
are
making mockery out of teachers is worse than a group of illiterates and they will be just a deception for the parents and society. Grouping them together will be wastage of money and time for the students, teachers and families.
Secondly
,
such
disruptive types of students once grouped together will not be able to meet the educational requirements and it will be a total failure for
such
an institute. These types of students and schools will bring bad name for the education. When
such
students will behave arrogantly in public
then
the question on their training will be raised and their mother institute will be blamed.
Moreover
, educational institutions harbouring
such
students will have deterioration in their national grading and nobody will think of putting their children in
such
schools. I reckon that grouping of
such
students will bring bad name to that particular institute. To conclude, I am of the opinion that different pupils should be taught in a group rather than sorting them out. Their grouping as per their behaviour will not be feasible to control them in their classes and will be a hindrance in achieving academic excellence. Not sorting them out will maintain the balance of discipline in the
class
and those having destructive traits can learn from the others having academic interests in collective uplifting of the image of the institution.
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