Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Recently, there
is
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has been
an ongoing debate about the significant impacts on the
economy
by thriving
tourism
industry
create
further
severe problems in local cultures and
environment
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environments
the environment
.
This
essay, as my notion leads to, tries to elaborate
this
issue as I believe that
problems
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the problems
created are inevitable.
Firstly
, the tourists, whether they are foreigners or local ones, tend to disobey the cultural background of the
tourism
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tourist
touristy
places. Even though they are well known about the surroundings habit, they consider themselves as guests who are supposed to be served by the local society paying no
attentions
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attention
to the native motives.
Secondly
, they care less about the
environment
such
as evergreens, rivers, beaches, etc.
because
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Because
they are aware of the government’s existence who has an obligation to maintain a quality
environment
. To be exact, they just throw the garbage away
into
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in
inappropriate places. The local people get influenced by the way tourists dress and talk and they
also
adopt other foreign cultures that are threatening to the local culture. It is often observed that people in
tourist area
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the tourist area
engage their children in work
instead
of sending them to school and that has a huge impact on the overall growth of the
economy
and
future
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the future
of a country, especially a
third
world country.
Lastly
, they together with stakeholders who are taking an interest, in
this
case, argue that
this
industry
can lift the nation from
economy
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economic
problem through opening job opportunities or increasing the income of local citizens as well as the government revenue at the same time, but it seems to be irrelevant. The experts revealed that
tourism
may cause more expenditure in preserving the unique local cultures and
also
more expenses in taking care of the
environment
surrounding
tourism
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toured
touristy
places, and it costs more than how much a nation can afford from the
industry
. Having considered all views above, it is
fact
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a fact
the fact
that
tourism sector
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the tourism sector
has positive effects on the
economy but
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economy, but
the negative impacts are much higher to overcome by money gotten from
this
particular sector. Hopefully, governments and councils can regulate the
industry
by taking more concern in all aspects (
economy
, culture, and
environment
) to result in the maximum outcome.
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