Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Recently, there

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has been

an ongoing debate about the significant impacts on the

economy

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by thriving

tourism

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industry

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create

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severe problems in local cultures and

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environment

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environments

the environment

.

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essay, as my notion leads to, tries to elaborate

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issue as I believe that

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the problems

created are inevitable.

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, the tourists, whether they are foreigners or local ones, tend to disobey the cultural background of the

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tourism

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tourist

touristy

places. Even though they are well known about the surroundings habit, they consider themselves as guests who are supposed to be served by the local society paying no

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attention

to the native motives.

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, they care less about the

environment

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such

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as evergreens, rivers, beaches, etc.

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Because

they are aware of the government’s existence who has an obligation to maintain a quality

environment

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. To be exact, they just throw the garbage away

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in

inappropriate places. The local people get influenced by the way tourists dress and talk and they

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adopt other foreign cultures that are threatening to the local culture. It is often observed that people in

tourist area

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the tourist area

engage their children in work

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of sending them to school and that has a huge impact on the overall growth of the

economy

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and

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the future

of a country, especially a

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world country.

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, they together with stakeholders who are taking an interest, in

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case, argue that

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industry

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can lift the nation from

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economy

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economic

problem through opening job opportunities or increasing the income of local citizens as well as the government revenue at the same time, but it seems to be irrelevant. The experts revealed that

tourism

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may cause more expenditure in preserving the unique local cultures and

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more expenses in taking care of the

environment

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surrounding

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tourism

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toured

touristy

places, and it costs more than how much a nation can afford from the

industry

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. Having considered all views above, it is

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a fact

the fact

that

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tourism sector

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the tourism sector

has positive effects on the

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economy but

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economy, but

the negative impacts are much higher to overcome by money gotten from

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particular sector. Hopefully, governments and councils can regulate the

industry

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by taking more concern in all aspects (

economy

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, culture, and

environment

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) to result in the maximum outcome.