You have decided to resign from your work in order try a new field. Write a letter to your boss In your letter • Tell your boss of your decision and explain why you are leaving • Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving • Ask for a letter of reference

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Dear

Mr.

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Kanappan, I am writing to let you know that I wish to withdraw my services from the job in order to become a pilot. It was my dream to be a pilot since childhood and I have

finally

decided to switch my career and undertake

pilot

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training course starting

this

summer.

This

current job taught me some most valuable things required for running a successful career. It made me realize the importance of

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team work

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in achieving the targets. It

also

improved my communication skills and decision

taking

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making

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ability in critical situations. I feel very sad leaving the job as the office was like a

second

home to me where everyone around felt like a family member. I would really appreciate

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you could provide me

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letter of reference for my future career. My passion and sincerity towards work mentioned in the letter would give me an edge over others to grab the best of opportunity. Thank you for your cooperation in

this

matter.

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Your

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sincerely, Gurjot Singh

Submitted by Gurjot on Sun May 31 2020

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7 paragraphs

171 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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