Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
In today's cosmopolitan
world
it is unusual to find a major city or Add a comma
world,
country
where there are no immigrants. Use synonyms
People
travel more now than they ever did in the past and populations have had to adapt to Use synonyms
this
transitional lifestyle much more quickly than in the past. Ultimately society, as a group of individuals, directs the way that new arrivals in a Linking Words
country
are treated. But the government can do a number of things to support Use synonyms
this
. Linking Words
Firstly
, all governments should insist that schools teach history and Linking Words
culture
from more than one Use synonyms
country
, not just the home nation. By learning how others have lived we gain insight into alternative cultures and ways of life which makes us more accepting when we meet Use synonyms
people
from those countries. Of Use synonyms
course
we don't have time to learn about the history of every Add a comma
course,
country
in the world but understanding at least one other Use synonyms
culture
opens our minds and makes us more tolerant. Use synonyms
In addition
, when immigrants choose to settle in a Linking Words
country
, the host government should offer free language and Use synonyms
culture
lessons. It is impossible for new arrivals to integrate if they do not understand the language and habits of their new home. I believe it is important for immigrants to learn the Use synonyms
culture
of the place they have chosen to settle. By acquiring the language and knowledge about the Use synonyms
culture
, they will be able Use synonyms
integrate
more easily and comfortably without necessarily losing their own identity. Add the particle
to integrate
Linking Words
Finally
the governments of countries should make sure that they have some stringent laws to protect Add a comma
Finally,
people
from aggression or prejudice so that, should an immigrant face terrible attitudes, they have some protection. By ensuring Use synonyms
people
feel safe the host Use synonyms
country
shows that it is civilized and promotes integration. In summary, understanding others is the key to harmonious living but laws should Use synonyms
also
be in place to protect Linking Words
people
from those who can't behave responsibly.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite