Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

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young people should look at the positive aspects of the Renowned

personalites

the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual

personalities

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people should idolize their

hardwork passion

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hard work, passion

hard work passion

and dedication in their

feild

a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed

field

feed

fields

for realization of their

achivement

the action of accomplishing something

achievement

achievements

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lack to

indentify

recognize as being; establish the identity of someone or something

identify

, the struggle and

achivements

the action of accomplishing something

achievements

achievement

of these well known people

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youngsters become negatively influenced which can

demotivate

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them regarding the futuristic approaches

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sportsperson

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skillful

having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude

skilful

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persitent

never-ceasing

persistent

, physically fit and emotionally stable

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still

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youth recognises sportsmen just for

thier

of them or themselves

their

advertsiments

a public promotion of some product or service

advertisements

and brand promotions on various social platforms

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thought process of youth has changed

pessimistcally

with pessimism; in a pessimistic manner

pessimistically

to an extent that they have started

beliving

the cognitive process that leads to convictions

believing

that to become

sucessful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

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one needs to have prosperity and physical appearance.

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young people involve themselves in the

activites

any specific behavior

activities

which are unacceptable in the society

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which can disturb the mental health and

outerlook

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outer look

of the youngsters

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to attain outstanding physique, adolescents start

consumption

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the consumption

of various

steriods

any of several fat-soluble organic compounds having as a basis 17 carbon atoms in four rings; many have important physiological effects

steroids

so as to make body changes

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To conclude the criteria of being famous have changed towards artificial sides as these

dignataries

an important or influential (and often overbearing) person

dignitaries

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are being acknowledged for their bank balance and appearance

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not for their

strenous

characterized by or performed with much energy or force

strenuous

work which is potential hazard for youngsters and followers

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