Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?
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young people should look at the positive aspects of the Renowned Accept space
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personalites
the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual
personalities
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people should idolize their Accept space
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hardwork passion
and dedication in their Accept comma addition
hard work, passion
hard work passion
feild
for realization of their a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed
field
feed
fields
achivement
the action of accomplishing something
achievement
achievements
.
Adding to Accept space
.
this
lack to indentify
, the struggle and recognize as being; establish the identity of someone or something
identify
achivements
of these well known peoplethe action of accomplishing something
achievements
achievement
,
youngsters become negatively influenced which can Accept space
,
demotivate
them regarding the futuristic approaches .
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For example
,
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sportsperson
is skillful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
,
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persitent
, physically fit and emotionally stablenever-ceasing
persistent
,
stillAccept space
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,
youth recognises sportsmen just for Accept space
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thier
of them or themselves
their
advertsiments
and brand promotions on various social platformsa public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
.
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Furthermore
thought process of youth has changed pessimistcally
to an extent that they have started with pessimism; in a pessimistic manner
pessimistically
beliving
that to become the cognitive process that leads to convictions
believing
sucessful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
,
one needs to have prosperity and physical appearance. Accept space
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Consequenlty
Suggestion
Consequently
,
young people involve themselves in the Accept space
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activites
which are unacceptable in the societyany specific behavior
activities
,
which can disturb the mental health and Accept space
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outerlook
of the youngstersSuggestion
outer look
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To illustrateAccept space
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,
to attain outstanding physique, adolescents start Accept space
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consumption
of various Suggestion
the consumption
steriods
so as to make body changesany of several fat-soluble organic compounds having as a basis 17 carbon atoms in four rings; many have important physiological effects
steroids
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To conclude the criteria of being famous have changed towards artificial sides as these Accept space
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dignataries
are being acknowledged for their bank balance and appearancean important or influential (and often overbearing) person
dignitaries
dentures
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not for their Accept space
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strenous
work which is potential hazard for youngsters and followerscharacterized by or performed with much energy or force
strenuous
.
Accept space
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