Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

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GENES PLAY A VITAL ROLE IN PHYSICAL APPERANCE OF AN INDIVIDUAL.

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, THE VIEWPOINT OF INHERITENCE TOWARDS BEHAVIOURIAL RESEMBLANCE DOES NOT HOLD ANY STAND

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, I COMPLETELY DISAGREE WITH THE GIVEN STATEMENT.

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ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN THAT PERSONALITY TRAITS ARE NOT SOLELY DEFINED BY GENES.

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WITH, HUMAN BEINGS

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MANKIND IS INEVITABLEY EXPOSED TO THE INFLUENCE OF ENVIRONMENT AND SURROUNDINGS WHERE THEY LIVE, WHICH RESULTS IN ENHANCING SOCIAL ENVIRONMENT//SCENARIO//SITUATION// RESULTING IN SHAPING MORAL AND ETHICAL VALUES IN A PERSON. ALONG WITH THAT, THERE ARE OTHER SHAPERS OF PERSONALITIES INCLUDING CULTURE AND EDUCATION. TO ELABORATE

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CULTUTRAL VALUES AFFECT THE WAY PEOPLE BEHAVE UNDER CERTAIN CIRCUMSTANCES WHILE EDUCATIONAL KNOWLEDGE ACTS AS A FOUNDATION ON WHICH PEOPLE BUILD AND DEVELOP THEIR OWN SETS OF DISTINCTIVE TRAITS.

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, A PERSON CAN OVERCOME SHYNESS AND SIMPLE-MINDEDNESS, BY LIVING WITH HIGH-INTERACTIVE AND WELL-EDUCATED COMMUNITY.

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, EFFORT IS A GREAT EQUALIZER IN INTENSIFYING//MAGNIFYING//STRENGHTENING PERSONAL QUALITIES. PEOPLE CAN CHANGE THEIR THINKING PATTERNS AND DEVELOP NEW BEHAVIOUR IF THEY ASSEMBLE ENOUGH EFFORTS. ADDING TO

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, EFFECTIVE ENDEAVOURS PROMOTES //ASSISTS//AIDS SELF- DISCIPLINE, COMMUNICATION

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MOTIVATION, AND FOCUS WHICH OUTCOMES IN ELEVATING PRIVATE ELEMENTS. TO EXAMPLIFY, POOR PERFORMERS CAN INSERT SUFFICIENT EFFORTS SO AS TO AVOID FAILURE IN FUTURE. TO CONCLUDE, IT IS SAID THAT PERSONALITY IS A PRE-EXISTING FEATURE

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DUE TO GENES BEFORE BIRTH,

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ENVIRONMENT AND EFFORTS PLAY A CRUCIAL/ PIVOTAL ROLE IN ALTERING // MODIFYING PERSONAL// INDIVIDUAL CHARACTERISITICS

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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235 words

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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

Fully explain your ideas

Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree oe disagree?

Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

The government’s investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Postponement, or the act of delaying a task, has been cited in some research articles as one of the factors for poor academic performance by some university students. What are some of the reasons behind students procrastinating, and what measures can be taken to address the problem?

Some people think that the best way to broaden young people’s understanding of the world is to encourage them to travel to other countries. do you agree or disagree?