The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

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The

cat

(Felis catus) is a domestic

species

of small carnivorous mammal.[1

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[2] It is the only domesticated

species

in the family Felidae and is often referred to as the domestic

cat

to distinguish it from the wild members of the family.[4] A

cat

can either be a house

cat

, a farm

cat

or a feral

cat

; the latter ranges freely and avoids human contact.[5] Domestic cats are valued by humans for companionship and their ability to hunt rodents. About 60

cat

breeds are recognized by various

cat

registries.[6] The

cat

is similar in anatomy to the other

felid

a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed

field

species

: it has a

strong flexible

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strong, flexible

body, quick reflexes, sharp teeth and retractable claws adapted to killing small prey. Its night vision and sense of smell are well developed.

Cat

communication includes vocalizations like meowing, purring, trilling, hissing, growling and grunting as well as

cat

-specific body language. It is a solitary

hunter but

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hunter, but

a social

species

. It can hear sounds too faint or too high in frequency for human ears,

such

as those made by mice and other small mammals. It is a predator

that is

most active at dawn and dusk.[7] It secretes and perceives pheromones.[8]

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

195 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

obesity
physical education
teamwork
discipline
nutrition education
healthy eating habits
balanced meals
junk food
parental involvement
community initiatives
fitness programs
government policies
subsidies
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Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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