The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants
The bar chart illustrates
proportion
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the proportion
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of people going
at
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USA
food
restaurants
according to
how
frequency
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ate fast
food
during
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the
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from 2003 to 2013. What stands out from the graph
that
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while
the least
frequency
of eating fast
food
was experienced by people who
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at
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restaurants
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everyday
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both 2003 and 2006, the most
frequency
of that was registered by people going in once a week.
Moreover
, fast
food
ate in once or twice a month in 2013 had the highest. As can be seen from the graph, the
proportion
of eating fast
food
in everyday 2003 and 2006 started at just under 5% and approximately 2.5% respectively. The
frequency
of going
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at
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a restaurant
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restaurant
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restaurants
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for eating fast
food
once a week came top ranking with slightly under a
third
and about 35% between 2003 and 2006 respectively.
On the other hand
, the
proportion
of eating fast
food
in
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began at roughly 2.5 % and
poople
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people
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food
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once or twice a month hit a peak in 2013, which
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for around 35%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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