The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants
The bar chart illustrates
proportion
of people going Add an article
the proportion
at
USA Change preposition
to
food
restaurants according to
how frequency
ate fast Replace the word
frequently
food
during
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apply
the
from 2003 to 2013.
What stands out from the graph Correct article usage
apply
that
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is that
while
the least frequency
of eating fast food
was experienced by people who going
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go
at
restaurants Change preposition
to
in
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apply
everyday
both 2003 and 2006, the most Replace the word
every day
frequency
of that was registered by people going in once a week. Moreover
, fast food
ate in once or twice a month in 2013 had the highest.
As can be seen from the graph, the proportion
of eating fast food
in everyday 2003 and 2006 started at just under 5% and approximately 2.5% respectively. The frequency
of going Change preposition
to at
at
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a
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a restaurant
the restaurant
restaurant
for eating fast Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
food
once a week came top ranking with slightly under a third
and about 35% between 2003 and 2006 respectively.
On the other hand
, the proportion
of eating fast food
in everyday
began at roughly 2.5 % and Replace the word
every day
poople
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people
proportion
of going for eating fast food
in
once or twice a month hit a peak in 2013, which Change preposition
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account
for around 35%.Correct subject-verb agreement
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