The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002
The chart below illustrates how many minutes of phone calls
occured
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occurred
in the UK in three categories between 1995
aand
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and
2002.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
while
local-fixed
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the local-fixed
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line
category
had the most
number
of minutes,
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the mobiles
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mobiles
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category
witnessed the lowest of that.
Further
,
number
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a number
the number
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of national and international-fixed
line
and mobiles
category
registered
a
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an
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increase from 1995 to 2002. At a glance,
number
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a number
the number
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of phone
cal
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call
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in
local-fixed
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the local-fixed
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category
was more than
the
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in the
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other categories -national and international-fixed
line
and mobies-
duing
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during
the period from 1995 to 2002.
In addition
, At the beginning of local fixed
line
number
was seen at above 70
billions
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billion
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in 1995.
Whereas
local
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the local
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fixed
line
rose slightly by 1999, which accounted for 90
billions
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billion
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, it decreased
at
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to
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about 70
billions
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billion
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from 1999 to 2000.
On the other hand
,
number
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a number
the number
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of
national
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the national
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and international fixed
line
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lines
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saw a slight rise, which stood at
from
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apply
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approximately 40 to 60
billions
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billion
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.
Moreover
,
number
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a number
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of mobiles started
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, category, number, billions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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