in the future, it seems more difficult to live on the earth. some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as mars. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Nowadays, government and environmental developers have been working hard to determine the best budget allocation mix, improving
environment
on the earth and researching other Add an article
the environment
planets
. I completely disagree with method
of spending more money on exploring other Add an article
the method
planets
than doing for globe
. Add an article
the globe
It is clear that
zone exploration has been and will always be extortionately expensive,
both labour and resources. First , If distance exploration were to be a main focus, Remove the comma
apply
this
would require to
recruiting more scientists and administrative staff. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, the salaries paid to astronomers and researchers are highest among industries, which would also
add to the deficit. Second , in order to conduct various required
a lot of experiments and Wrong verb form
requires
bring
objects into space for the purpose of finding other Wrong verb form
bringing
planets
, therefore
location-exploration projects always consume a number of resources, such
as oil or metals. In fact, NASA, National Aeronautics and area
AdministrationCapitalize word
Area
,
consume one hundred million dollars every year, which Remove the comma
apply
mean
that there would be less input to develop other industries and grow economically. Another compelling Correct subject-verb agreement
means
reasons
Fix the agreement mistake
reason
are
that the chance of finding other Correct subject-verb agreement
is
planets
is slim and even if the humans succeeded, it would still be impossible to move on there. Firstly
, since distances between the planets
and dust are vast, citizens must pay a big amount of money to be gone
to that planet. In fact, it would take millions of years for the man-made slot craft to reach the nearest star, by which time all humans could no longer exist. Wrong verb form
go
Furthermore
, government
should not ignore the problems on Add an article
the government
a
globe, which directly impact Correct article usage
the
on
all species living on the globe, Change preposition
apply
such
as climate change or greenhouse
effect. Add an article
the greenhouse
For example
, climate change should top the list since this
can cause a lot of types of cancers in the near future. In conclusion, although
research other planet
reasonably, Change the wording
another planet
other planets
but
I still believe that improving Correct word choice
apply
environment
on the planet is more important because of the above-mentioned reasons.Add an article
the environment
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