in the future, it seems more difficult to live on the earth. some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as mars. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Nowadays, government and environmental developers have been working hard to determine the best budget allocation mix, improving

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on the earth and researching other

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. I completely disagree with

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of spending more money on exploring other

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than doing for

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zone exploration has been and will always be extortionately expensive

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both labour and resources. First , If distance exploration were to be a main focus,

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would require

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recruiting more scientists and administrative staff.

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, the salaries paid to astronomers and researchers are highest among industries, which would

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add to the deficit. Second , in order to conduct various

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a lot of experiments and

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objects into space for the purpose of finding other

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location-exploration projects always consume a number of resources,

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as oil or metals. In fact, NASA, National Aeronautics and

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consume one hundred million dollars every year, which

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that there would be less input to develop other industries and grow economically. Another compelling

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that the chance of finding other

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is slim and even if the humans succeeded, it would still be impossible to move on there.

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, since distances between the

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and dust are vast, citizens must pay a big amount of money to

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to that planet. In fact, it would take millions of years for the man-made slot craft to reach the nearest star, by which time all humans could no longer exist.

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should not ignore the problems on

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globe, which directly impact

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all species living on the globe,

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as climate change or

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effect.

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, climate change should top the list since

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can cause a lot of types of cancers in the near future. In conclusion,

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research

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I still believe that improving

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the environment

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on the planet is more important because of the above-mentioned reasons.