some people think that international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution,however others think there are other ways.discuss both views and give your opinion
While some people think that international
car
free days is effectively reduce air
pollution
,
others believe that there are many ways help Accept space
,
reducing
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to reduce
air
pollution
instead
of adopting car
free days.From my point of view, it will get better when we improve other solutions instead
of focus on the international car
free days.
On the one
hand that international car
free days is
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are
one
of the ways reduce level atmosphere problems.the
most Suggestion
The
compellimg
reason for holding to my view is that driving or forcing
compelling
car
is necessary in everyone’s move. But it Suggestion
the car
a car
also
the main causes of increase level realtively
high proportion of pollutants and traffic jam every in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
relatively
day
.International car
free day
is suggested to encourage use
of public transport or using hybrid motobike
small motorcycle with a low frame and small wheels and elevated handlebars
motorbike
istead
of using in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
Istead
prive
the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)
price
private
car
.Example, when people move by bike is also
one
of ways not only reduce emission toxic fumer,
but Accept space
,
also
help people can do exercises.However
,
daily routine is affected by no Accept space
,
car
days, moving in
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at
this
time will be more difficulty
than every Suggestion
more difficult
day
.In fact,
people using too much public transports in a Accept space
,
day
also
overloaded public transports.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
government
suggested many solutions to protect the environment Suggestion
the government
instead
of only focusing on no car
day
.Firstly
, government should invest money in public transports and provide incentives for users of this
to encourage users.Especially should invest in facilities so that people feel comfortable using as well as the increase in car
prices also
reduces people’s use
of cars.Moreover
,
the Accept space
,
air
poluttion
comes not only from personal undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
vehicles but
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vehicles, but
also
from some people’s habits such
as using chemicals ,
burning trash,…..The government should introduce laws to limit Accept space
,
pollution
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pollution, such
such
as green tax
,..
The application international Suggestion
green taxes
a green tax
car
free days have their own advantages and disadvantages.in
my opinionSuggestion
In
,
there are many solutions popular than and brings much better results.If only Accept space
,
one
day
does not use
cars every year,
but other days cars still used so the problems of Accept space
,
air
pollution
are still not tacked.Instead we
should encourage people to Accept comma addition
Instead, we
use
environmentally friendly means to limit pollution
.
Conclusion,
we should come up with more effective solutions Accept space
,
instead
of relying on no cars.Submitted by Lanh Duong on
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