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The Internet provides us with information about life and cultures of different countries and some people say it is not necessary to visit these countries to learn about them. to what extent do you agree or disagree? give your opinion and relevant examples.

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Internet
 provides
information
 about the life and cultures of various countries on our screens very easily, whereas many people feel that they should travel around the
world
 to know different countries.
This
 essay will discuss about whether people should visit different countries and travel around the
world
, or should simply browse the
internet
 about various countries. The
internet
 has proved to be the most useful tool in todays
world
,
therefore
, it not only provides
information
 within our
country
, but
also
,
information
 about the whole
world
 in a single click. A person can easily know about the culture, cuisines, and many other things whenever they want. The
internet
 has made our life so comfortable that we can search about any kind of
information
 about any
country
 without wasting any single penny and time. With the help of photos and videos of famous tourist spots we can see
such
 places directly on our computers and phones. In my opinion, to know the culture, tradition and the lifestyle of a particular
country
, a person should personally visit that
country
 to understand the
country
 in a better way. The experience that we get by travelling to different places cannot be achieved by browsing countries on the
internet
.
Therefore
, once we start exploring various nations, we tend to learn more and judge more about that place. To conclude,
internet
 has its own pros and cons, but, at the time of exploring a new place, it can only be successful if we personally visit that
country
 and not search it on Google.
Submitted by vaishalibhardwaj2010 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • authentic experiences
  • first-hand experiences
  • face-to-face conversations
  • cultural practices
  • bridging cultural gaps
  • personal growth
  • problem-solving skills
  • adaptability skills
  • online resources
  • real-world experiences
  • misrepresentation
  • biased
  • emotional connections
  • virtual exploration
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