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the youth in many countries are unemployed and unskilled where at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Today, the majority of people get accustomed to believing in terms of the necessity for people of the military services, because of having unemployed and
unexperienced
lacking practical experience or training
inexperienced
 young people in many countries. I completely agree with an advantageous and paramount of compulsory military
service
.
Firstly
, one reason why I agree with the given statement is that military services give people more opportunities for living better
instead
 of having the air of unemployment,
such
 as, preparing any situations in both social and physical ways, experiencing any precautions for several health problems and so on.
As a result
, they are more likely to be stronger, as well as, watchful anywhere.
Moreover
, they do not need to train again more times in terms of defecting. It is considered to be profitable for
developing
Suggestion
development
 of the power of the government's military services among other states.
Secondly
, the minority of young people are followed to be reluctant, afraid of happening some injuries and accidents.
That is
 to say, if they are involved in
complusory
required by rule
compulsory
 military
service
, it is impossible not to go there without any reasons,
consequently
, they can visit thoroughly, as well as, lose their scary in a period of seeing their peers. Along with
this
,
they
Suggestion
They
 can try to accomplish any actions together with the same ages, through imitating.
In addition
, if compulsory
service
 is organized with a correct measure, the rates of unemployment will decrease dramatically among young people in the government. It leads
to be
Suggestion
to being
 the most powerful military services in any situation,
such
 as
,
Accept space
,
 appearing wars or invasions between states. In conclusion, in spite of having unqualified youth in
such
 countries, I personally believe that compulsory military
service
 is the best measure to tackle
this
 occasion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compulsory
  • Military service
  • Unemployed
  • Unskilled
  • Discipline
  • National pride
  • Civic duty
  • Enlistment
  • Conscription
  • Cohesive society
  • Civilian life
  • Government resources
  • Ethical concerns
  • Forced enlistment
  • Individual freedoms
  • Psychological effects
  • Personal beliefs
  • Societal tensions
  • Career disruption
  • National security
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