With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
In the recent years, due to advancements in science and technology, health sector has reached a new level.
As a result
, there is growth in the elderly population. Many people would argue that Linking Words
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will impose a burden on society. Linking Words
However
, I have the opinion that the growing number of aged people is manageable due to Linking Words
existence
of government plans.
Nobody can deny the fact that researchers have done immense innovations in the medical field. Now treatments are available for those diseases Suggestion
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also
which were once considered Linking Words
uncurable
, incapable of being cured
incurable
for example
cancer. On one side, if number of hospitals has increased in the few years, so does the long term care centres for the older generation. Linking Words
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, more people can be Linking Words
accomodated
in these facilities. be agreeable or acceptable to
accommodated
In addition
, the Governments of many countries provide welfare services to the aging people so that they do not put any burden on the society. Linking Words
For instance
, the Canadian Government provides benefits to the seniors who Linking Words
are aged
greater than 65. The funds spent on these services is actually the money these people paid as taxes in their earlier working years. Suggestion
age
Thus
, the amount they receive depends on their level of income.
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Furthermore
, the Government and banks have started many savings plans for the retired people as well. People can save small amounts of money on a monthly or yearly basis that will be useful after their retirement. Linking Words
For example
, there is a Registered Retired Savings Plan Program offered by many banks in which people will contribute during the period when they are employed. Linking Words
This
saved money with interest by the banks, will help them satisfy their when they are unable to work.
In conclusion, I Linking Words
beleive
that the expenses of elderly masses can be easily managed by the Government schemes and it would not be burdensome for the society.accept as true; take to be true
believe
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