Some people say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work. Is hard work the key to success, or talent also important?

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Nowadays, there is a common debate on

success

. Some people support that

success

consists of only 10 per

cent tal

a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)

percent

ent and 90 percent hard

work

. I completely agree that hard

work

is most

crucial factor to

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the most crucial factor

have

success

, compared with talent. As can be seen in media, lots of successful persons achieve their

success

thanks to more practices, believing themselves and showing more effort. It is most

possible tha

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more possible

success

comes up with

such

as most unprecedented product after people

work

hard.

However

, being gifted does

not significantly has suf

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does not significantly have

ficient effect on being successful.

For example

, when Bill Gates, owner of Microsoft, the biggest tech company, established his own business, there were not enough computers at the time because the comp

uters siz

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computer's

e were bigger than the current comp

uters siz

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computer's

e, which means that there was really hard to reach them many times to not be indi

vidual pro

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individually

uct.

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produced

productive

producers

producing

Nevertheless

, Bill found a way to attain those computers.

First

, he provided influential contacts with university’s officer and worked on comp

uter more tha

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the computer more

n ten thousand hours.

In addition

, most of times, he was asleep at university for the sake of achieving his dream. After he had launched his product, his business career strikingly boomed.

As a result

, without less talent, he has

been attaining his

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has attained

successful life for 3 decades.

However

, some occupations like composer, or musician have to do with gifted to larg

e extent bec

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a large extent

ause no one could have beau

tiful singing voice and

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a beautiful singing voice

beautiful singing voices

strongly express yourself by composing music.

For instance

, Koray Avcı, famo

us singer in

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a famous singer

Turkey, achieved

success

while he did not put in a great deal of effort. It was enough for him to upload his voice record on inte

rnet, bu

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the internet

t many people like me can

not mak

can not

cannot

e money by singing song

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songs

a song

Therefore

, those talented persons could be exce

ption whi

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an exception

exceptions

ch I indicate example on above. To sum up, being successful substantially core

lated wit

mutually related

correlated

h hard

work

, but some jobs may be evaluated out of

this

list. I think that If people do not have artistic skills to succ

eed their life , t

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succeed in their life

Accept space

y might be successful in their area which they admire by working hard.

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