For schoolchildren, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In early life, people have nothing in their mind, all the thing they do is just learning. Especially, for schoolchildren who spend almost
time
per
day
learning things, the
impact
of adults is very important to their smart and
also
their social skills. Two main sources of
this
impact
is
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are
the kids teacher and
parent
, but in my opinion, teacher have more influence to schoolchildren than their
parent
do
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does
.
On
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In
class, children are contacted by many others
this
is one of the most important impacts to develop their social skills and
also
their intelligence. And teachers, orientate
children
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child
child's
children's
development,
also
play a very important role. Because they can directly influence to the kids, contact
to
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with
them the hold
day
, tell them how to think and what to do, so teachers would affect children very significantly. An immaturity
children
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child's
mind is so
easily
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easy
to be affected by environment just like a white paper being
paint
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painted
by colours, some just hear and follow all the
thing
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things
their teachers said. About parents, even they are the most important pieces of a
child
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child's
life, but their
impact
to them would not as big as a teacher.
First
, for schoolchildren,
parent
’ contact
time
per
day
is a bit limited when they must go to school hold
day
from the early morning to the late night. Their remaining
time
at home, what was limited, be used for many things personal hygiene, homework, entertaining,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
so the
time
to talk to their parents is really limited. The
second
thing is that parents are the
first
people they meet in their life, it is a
miracle but
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miracle, but
sometime, to children, it is boring. Two people always tell them things would make them feel boring because of that children have a tend not to hear their
parent
but hear outsider teachings. To conclude, even
parent
also have
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also has
a big
impact
on school
children
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child's
children's
child
intelligence and their social development, but teachers would play more important roles because their contact
time
to
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with
the kids is many
time
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times
more than the kids’ parents.
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