For schoolchildren, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In early life, people have nothing in their mind, all the thing they do is just learning. Especially, for schoolchildren who spend almost

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learning things, the

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of adults is very important to their smart and

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their social skills. Two main sources of

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the kids teacher and

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, but in my opinion, teacher have more influence to schoolchildren than their

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does

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class, children are contacted by many others

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is one of the most important impacts to develop their social skills and

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their intelligence. And teachers, orientate

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play a very important role. Because they can directly influence to the kids, contact

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them the hold

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, tell them how to think and what to do, so teachers would affect children very significantly. An immaturity

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child's

mind is so

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easy

to be affected by environment just like a white paper being

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painted

by colours, some just hear and follow all the

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their teachers said. About parents, even they are the most important pieces of a

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child's

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to them would not as big as a teacher.

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, for schoolchildren,

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’ contact

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per

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is a bit limited when they must go to school hold

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from the early morning to the late night. Their remaining

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at home, what was limited, be used for many things personal hygiene, homework, entertaining,

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continuing in the same way

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so the

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to talk to their parents is really limited. The

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thing is that parents are the

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people they meet in their life, it is a

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sometime, to children, it is boring. Two people always tell them things would make them feel boring because of that children have a tend not to hear their

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but hear outsider teachings. To conclude, even

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also has

a big

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on school

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child's

children's

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intelligence and their social development, but teachers would play more important roles because their contact

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with

the kids is many

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more than the kids’ parents.