the chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. write a report.
The given bar chart illustrates the weekly entertainment period (in hours)
that is
enjoyed by five different working groups based on their sex, during 1998-99.
Overall
, the jobless and the post retirement
categories of people showed a maximum number of enjoyable hours. The men are ahead of women in all the groups except the housewives and Add a hyphen
post-retirement
part
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part-time
time
workers that does
not have any male representation.
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do
To begin
with the unemployed and retired people made the best use of their leisure time
in terms of joy. These figures were 80 hrs
/week
for males and 78 hrs
/week
for females in both the
categories.
It was followed by the housewives who could manage to enjoy 50 Correct article usage
apply
hrs
in every week
. This
group was obviously reserved for the
females only.
Amongst the rest of the two groups I.e. those working Correct article usage
apply
full
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full-time
time
or part-time
, the number of enjoyment hours for females remained almost closer to 40hrs/week
. Whereas
in Correct article usage
the full
full
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full-time
time
job category, this
figure was 45hrs/week
for men. But surprisingly enough, the men did not have any representation amongst the part
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part-time
time
jobbers.Submitted by aadidoc508 on
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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