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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#communication
It is often argued that by some people oral
communication
 is pretty impressive, other think that written
language
 is more forceful. I completely agree
this
 opinion and think spoken
language
 is much more important rather than written
communication
.
First
 of all, there are could be more beneficial factors,
however
, one of the most influential sides is understood easily. It means that if the people use their both mime and gestures during the
communication
 they can show their emotions rightly,
also
 can explain their interesting ideas without difficulties to others.
For instance
, face to face interview is a prime example, more and more high-capacity companies prefer to spoken
language
 when they accept new staff or redundant their personals.
That is
 why, in
such
 situations spoken
communication
 makes an effective way for individuals.
Secondly
, another main benefit is progressing significantly the speech. It is clear that with the help of spoken
communication
 most of the people can a great progression on their speech. It means that having used spoken
language
 frequently, people can rich their vocabularies with effective words.
Also
, they can gain oratory skill which plays a considerable role in people career or their education life. One of the good examples is TED’x where high-capacity people communicate with the majority of auditory.
Although
 their target is speaking novel stories or teaching deep knowledge of the auditory, despite
this
, they
also
 are an effective way to progress the speech. In conclusion,
although
 the merits of written
language
 to be taken into account,
however
, I fully believe that the benefits of spoken
communication
 can outweigh it.
Submitted by Eli Valiyev on

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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