Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The line graph compares the percentage of watcher in terms of
TV
and
radio
in the UK from October to December 1992. Overall, both of figures experienced
different trend
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a different trend
in
time period
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the time period
. While most people
listened
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listened to radio
radio
in the morning, the percentage of people watched
TV
in the evening. There are more people who watch
TV
than there were listening to the
radio
. As the graph shows, UK’s
TV
watcher figure started at
fewer
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less
than 10%
at
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in
1.00 am.
This
situation
remain
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remains
a stable until at 5.00
pm
,
then
the figure of
TV
witnessed a dramatic increase
at
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of
approximately 45% around 9
pm
, afterwards, there was a slight decrease in audiences by under 20%
at
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in
11.00
pm
.
Likewise
, the proportion of listeners to the
radio
began fewer than 5%
at
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in
1.00am.
This
process remained constant until 6.00pm. After
this
, the percentage of listeners
experiences
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experience
a sharp increase almost 30%
at
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in
9.00pm, before the figure of the
radio
fluctuated in a steady drop nearly 5% at the end of the day.
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