You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place ina local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel,but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel •explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the managee should do to improve the food in the future.
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Dear Sir/Madam
I am formally writing
this
letter to inform you about our participants
feedback regarding Change to a genitive case
participant's
participants'
with
the hotel facilities and food services. The hotel was perfectly fine. Change preposition
apply
However
, there are some complaints about the foods that has
been served.
Let me explain in more Change the verb form
have
details
. Almost all of the participants were fascinated by the classical architecture of the hotel. Fix the agreement mistake
detail
In addition
, the room that we occupied for the meeting was designed just like the way we wanted it. However
, the food that has been served was quite disappointing especially the roast chicken. It was not roasted properly. Hence
, the blood was still visible and resulted with
Change preposition
in
foul
smell.
I would highly suggest to the Add an article
a foul
the foul
staffs
, especially the kitchen staff, should recheck the Fix the agreement mistake
staff
the
food before serving it to Remove the redundancy
apply
Add an article
the guest
guest
. They may request for a new roaster machine in which Fix the agreement mistake
guests
readly
available in the Correct your spelling
readily
markey
, in order for them to roast the chicken properly and fast.
Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,Correct your spelling
market
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