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Speaking communication is always more powerful than writing communication. Do you agree or disagree?

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has been arguing
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 that speaking is much more efficient compared to writing in all cases. From my point of view, while verbal expression is optimal to convey our ideas in a variety of situations, writing communication has its own strength. On the one hand, we have to learn to speak before we can write down our thought, so speaking is a good way to convey our ideas as well as our willpower to another.
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, a graduation ceremony may not be complete without an announcement from the principle. What is more, public speaking is now considered as an important attribute of leadership. The implication of
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 is that persons who are able to persuade other people in a group or a company
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 his word are more likely to be a good leader. In spite of the above arguments, there are situations in which a paper can work better than a speech. A case in point is the Holy Bible
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 the book read most frequently in the world and there is no way of expression that can be more efficient.
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, to instill detailed and complex information to the others, a speech seems to be less useful due to difficulties to remember exactly a great deal of details.
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, a paper allows us to recall any points whenever we need.
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, in every conference, a speech always accompanies with a relevant document in order to help audiences to understand clearly all contents. In a word, speaking as well as writing are both beneficial for humans in communication.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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