Universities should accept equal number of male and female student in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In
this
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day and age some of the specialized fields are dominated by one or other gender.
Although
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some feel that tertiary institutes should
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
almost equal number of males and
femles
an animal that produces gametes (ova) that can be fertilized by male gametes (spermatozoa)
females
in every discipline, I think that it would have
negative impact
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a negative impact
because of 2 reasons.
Firstly
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, some of the fields require much of physical efforts which every
student
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specially
females
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female
can not
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
.
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
acknowledge that it would lead to scarcity of single sex professionals in specific fields, the problem is that if some institutions tried to forcefully
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
a
student
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in one or other subject
,
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,
it would cause them to drop out later on when they choose it as a profession. Take an example of
armed forces
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the armed forces
. As these fields demand more physical efforts, physical fitness is amongst one of their eligibility criteria. Students who
doesn't meet
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don't meet
have not met
that criterion, cannot pursue
itvas
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a career.
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,
consequently
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, leads to deficiency of working officers and country as a whole will suffer. The other key reason is
student
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's personal interest. Those in favour of equal number of both girls and boys in each course
claim
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claiming
claims
that if almost equal numbers of sex students admitted in a course, it would boost their confidence level and the sense of competition, both of which required for active learning. I would argue that lack of interest in specific
field
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generally could not motivate every
student
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to take part actively in the class activities.
This
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will ultimately affect their grades, so their moral too.
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,
this
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vicious cycle seems likely to make some of those, leave their respective
field
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and ultimately become unemployed in
long-term
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the long-term
. In conclusion, forcefully enrolling the students of any gender in any
discipline not
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discipline, not
only will decrease their level of interest, but
also
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make them ineligible when they choose that
field
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as a profession. I,
therefore
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, strongly disagree that
this
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trend of admitting
equal number
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an equal number
of men and women in any
field
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will bring any benefit neither
for
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to
society nor for individuals.
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