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Some people think that it is important to use leisure tomr for activities that improve mind,such as doing word pusompwzzles or reading.Other feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some people argue that, it is important to do
leisure
time
 activities
such
 as puzzles or reading. Others argue that, it is important to resting the
mind
 during
this
leisure
time
. I strongly agree that, it is important to resting the
mind
 while doing
such
 of the
leisure
 activities.
Therefore
, following
this
 essay will explain my viewpoints in detail and reach to a conclusion.
Firstly
, it can be said that, it is more important to do the
leisure
 activities. Because, It will allow people to enjoy their free
time
 and will give an opportunity to develop their
mind
 by doing
such
 activities like Playing Chess and Puzzle, Reading books and Much More.
Such
 of the brain development activities will
also
 help to improve the skills
such
 as rational thinking, independence minded and analytical skills. Especially, that Playing chess and Puzzle will be helping to develop people's active
mind
 and will
also
 teach on how to become more competitive.
Also
 doing
such
 of activities will help to create a sensible
mind
.
However
, There are
also
 some people tend to be relaxing in their homes without doing anything. They believe that, It is the best way of enjoying their
leisure
time
.
Also
,
such
 of the people are preferring to do the sleeping.
Therefore
,
this
 can be said as an effective ways of enjoying a
leisure
time
 and can be helpful to reduce a person's work stress.
Finally
, it can be concluded that, It is important to do the
leisure
time
 activities
such
 as playing puzzle and chess.
Besides
, it is
also
 important to rest the
mind
 during
leisure
time
 by taking a sleep.
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