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Band 6

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Sir, I apologize for the inconvenience caused to you
last
Linking Words
due
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todue
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 the
late night
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late-night
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 birthday party. I am writing
this
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 letter to express the scenario in which these things has happened and I will take care of
this
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 in future. I work in an IT company as a software engineer and
Currently
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,Currently
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 move from Mumbai to Chandigarh.
Last
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 night my friends visited me to have a party for
this
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 new job. I was not aware
about
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of
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 the broken glass of the window of the front door and
thus
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 the sound of music went out of the room and cause the disturbance. I did inform
about
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apply
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it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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to
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apply
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the landlord and they will repair it as soon as possible. As you mention in your letter your child has final terms due in the
next
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 week, no more trouble will be caused to you in future. I have you understand the condition and accept my sorry for the same. I would like to hear from you soon. Apologies Yours Faithfully, Preeti
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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