Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species . Discuss both views and give your opinion ?

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Protection of
animal kingdom
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the animal kingdom
is a growing concern among environmentalists and they suggested that constructing wildlife
sancturies
a consecrated place where sacred objects are kept
sanctuaries
sanctuary
is
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are
a good
opton
the right to buy or sell property at an agreed price; the right is purchased and if it is not exercised by a stated date the money is forfeited
option
options
to safeguard them
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merits and demerits
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On the positive side
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wildlife
sancturaries
a consecrated place where sacred objects are kept
sanctuaries
can provide a natural habitat
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as
aresult
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a result
the life expectancy and breeding capacity may increase
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The best example is the Gir National Park in Gurath have been protecting a large number of tigers for more than three decades because a vast forest area is reserved only for animals and four rivers floating through
this
park even make the animals feel it is a comfortable environment to adapt with
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
kids
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Secondly
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many accidental
death
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deaths
can be
avoid
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avoided
as humans get a
chance
to see these animals through a protected
vehicle
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vehicle, therefore
therefore
less
chance
to throw
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generic name for certain synthetic or semisynthetic materials that can be molded or extruded into objects or films or filaments or used for making e.g. coatings and adhesives
plastic
plates
wastes and food items to
road
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the road
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If in a zoo the rush of visitors and
there
of them or themselves
their
negligance
failure to act with the prudence that a reasonable person would exercise under the same circumstances
negligence
may badly affect animals physical and mental health
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On the negative aspect
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financial burden
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the financial burden
for
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of
government is heavy because a vast area of land
need
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needed
to allocate and the revenue is less as there are many
restictions
a principle that limits the extent of something
restrictions
given by the authority may
decrese
decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
the
visitor's
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visitor
number significantly
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Moreover
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many incidents have been reported about animal poaching and hunting as many offenders tie up with
correpted
containing errors or alterations
corrupted
forest officers and harm animals
such
as
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five-toed pachyderm
elephants
elephant
elegant
for tusks and tigers for fur
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To conclude
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despite of economic difficulties and
chance
for animal hunting
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I believe
advantages
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the advantages
of wildlife
sancturies
a consecrated place where sacred objects are kept
sanctuaries
are more in terms of health aspect and
chance
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the chance
a chance
for more breeding
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • eco-tourism
  • wildlife conservation
  • sanctuaries
  • habitats
  • ethical concerns
  • dependency
  • preservation
  • educational opportunities
  • economic benefits
  • isolation
  • intervention
  • overcrowded
  • finite resources
  • behavioral changes
  • conservation efforts
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